Our Trailer..

This is the first draft of our trailer, Im not really satisfied on the way it came out. I feel like we need a lot of more ending to do. The film was to shaky, and I didn't like the way it transitions from the interview with Jesse back to the roof, I find it kind of boring. We just need to make our video more creative and different. Our task should be to capture the viewers attention. 
I mean it isn't really bad for our first trailer, we just need a lot of improving to do and with dedication and participation i think my group and i can do it.
My First Project from Mediastorm New Design on Vimeo.